Sew it back once more,
And watch it beat, as it rests in your palms.
Look beneath the sham of her fragile boldness
Undress her
Free her
And let your soul entwine with hers.
Hold her hand and take the leap!
Falling upwards,
Into the blazing light of a rising sun.
12 comments:
:)
ps: for some reason ur atom feed sin;t working :( i never know when u update!! i jus drop in once in a while hoping u've posted! :)
good luck for all your exams.. and i was just joking about the teasing.. take your time with your bf :-)
{after all, we know, you should give luuuurvv all the time it needs! ;-))}
shub- sorrry... glad u brought it to my notice, i had no clue my atom feed was screwed up! hope it works now...
saurabh - ye wise one, dont worry :) i will.
:) splendid...
nice to read your poetry.Gives me the inspiration to write something ...but all i get in the end is few rhyming words like glow and blow..one day i ll.. :)
prophet- thanks! :) i'm sure one day u'll... ;)
NOTE FOR ONE N ALL- "falling upwards"- read that phrase somewhere in floots blog... loved it so much, it just wouldnt leave my brain, n hence d next time i ended up writin haddd to use that phrase! :) hope you don't mind floots.
I'm flattered! You've just taken a bit of word-clay, added it to yours, and fashioned something new from it. I'm glad to see you writing more poetry.
Fantastic writing Gul!
hey hey hey! daw... you make me wanna start a new blog and throw in my poems & all the other stuff i write which is not humour based!
your aura has love written all over it!! itz probably a man.. HAW HAW.. ouch bad one...!
on second thought i think i'll start throwing in my 'other' stuff in my current blog itself! its my space after all.. !
u should do that kets... still remember reading one poem of yours back in school about death... :)
the lone rangers- thank u :)
i'm stuck between exams that seem to endlessly stretch out before me.. hopefully will be able to blog soon.
good luck with them exams! :-)
Post a Comment